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John | 12th Feb 2012, 05:00 AM | HKDSE英文科Paper 1 | (3409 Reads)

短改寫題(Short Rewriting question)是必考題種。方式很多,一部分已在我對2012 Practice Paper 1A的前四個分析說了,這次談餘下的三題。 

我將最蠱惑的一題先寫,這種陰濕叫「太多資料題」/「太多資料要你先分類才寫題」/「太多資料你全抄就白化時間但分數沒有增加題」。 

Question 17 (題目沒有給你指明資料是哪一段,但Question 16問的是前一段即paragraph [11]

How are circuses worse places for animals than zoos and aquariums?  Name two different ways. (2 marks)different 這個字很重要,它可以令你少一分,但題目沒有給你寫成DIFFERENT,此乃其陰濕點。)

a)      living conditions are deplorable // cages are too small

b)      animals are treated cruelly // animals are beaten // animals are given electric shocks 

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[12] Circuses are even worse places for animals.  Their living conditions are deplorable, especially in travelling circuses where cages have to be small so that they can go on the road.  Training animals to perform tricks often involves starvation and cruelty.  Undercover investigations have repeatedly shown animals being beaten and given electric shocks.

注意:
1)      短改寫時要注意意思完整,例如在b) 要加上animals,你不可能寫beaten就有分,你要寫成animals are beaten
2)      短改寫時要注意文法,例如cruelty要改寫成cruelly,以配合其在animals are treated cruelly中的文法要求。
3)      短改寫時可能要加字,例如在animals are treated cruelly裡的treated是原文沒有的。
4)      短改寫時也要注意文中可能給你「太多」資料,你寫其中一項就可以,但這些資料可能分為兩類,例如這題,a)的資料有兩項,b)的資料有三項,但如果你只寫a)的兩項或只寫b)的三項,你只會得兩分中的一分,你必須寫a)其中一項和b)其中一項。若你將living conditions are deplorable 寫作a),將cages are too small 寫作b),你只會有一分,因為living conditions are deplorable cages are too small 是同一類的,而題目要你寫two different ways 

Question 4 

From the information given in paragraph 2, name THREE ways that Ocean Park promotes wildlife education. (3 marks)

a)      (Ocean Park Academy) courses
b)      animal encounter programmes
c)      restaurant information panels // information panels in restaurant // information displays Text裡的display verb,答案的displays noun 

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[2] At Ocean Park Academy, over 35,000 schoolchildren participate each year in our courses.  They include children with special financial needs and children from schools in remote areas.  Guests can also participate in our animal encounter programme, which gives them a chance to see some of Asia’s rarest animals.  Even our restaurants display information panels which advocate wise seafood choices in support of sustainable agricultural and fisheries practices.

Question 13

According to paragraph 7, why was Sea World in the news?

A trainer was killed by a whale // a whale grabbed a trainer // a whale pulled a trainer underwater and killed him // a trainer was attacked and killed by a whale 

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[7] In February 2010, at the Sea World amusement park in Florida, USA, a whale grabbed a trainer, Dawn Brancheau, pulled her underwater and thrashed about with her.  By the time the rescuers arrived, Brancheau was dead.  The death of the trainer is a tragedy, and one can only have sympathy for her family.  But the incident raises broader questions: was the attack deliberate?  Did the whale, nicknamed Tilly, act out of stress at being held captive in a sterile concrete tank?  Was he tired of being forced to perform to amuse the crowds?  Is it right to keep such large animals in close confinement?

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