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John | 11th Feb 2012, 20:25 PM | HKDSE英文科Paper 2 | (19505 Reads)

想起,關於Paper 2Part A,我只寫過一篇博談(http://englishwizard.mysinablog.com/index.php?op=ViewArticle&articleId=2468886)。這次多寫一篇。

以下是考評局2012Practice Paper 2 Part A 的題目、參考範文和思路講解。

For question 1, write about 200 words.

1.      Your school is holding a walkathon to raise money for charity.  Complete the following sections of the information poster below to promote the walkathon and encourage students and their families to take part.

Annual Walkathon for Walk to Build

Sunday 18 March 2012

Help to raise money to build schools in China

Why take part?  ______________________________________

The route of the walk _________________________________

The work of Walk to Build ______________________________

題外話

考評局的題目是有漏洞的。有留意嗎?考評局的poster framework沒有起程時間(只有日期),亦沒有叫你加寫,而起程時間對是否決定參與有決定影響!不過,我在The route of the walk的部分加進了。

兩項注意:

1.      如果Part A要你寫三部分,每部分的字數最好相若,例如要你寫200字,給了你三個小標題,最好每個部分5080字。

2.      Part A的句子不宜太長,因為每個部分只寫5080字。

Why take part?  
Rural China is in desperate need of schools.  School buildings are vehicles for promoting education, which empowers people to improve their lives and communities.  Building schools in China depends heavily on generous donations.  The participation of you and your families in the walkathon will demonstrate the commitment of people of all ages and sectors to the education cause of China.  It will also increase the fund-raising impact, since our school has agreed and will match every dollar we raise. 79 words(大意:中國的農村很需要學校。校舍是推動教育的載體(vehicle),教育讓人有能力(empower)改善本身的生活和社區。在中國建設校舍,端賴慷慨捐款。你和你家人參與步行籌款(walkathon),既能顯示各界人士不分老幼都對中國教育事業有所承擔,還會增加籌款活動的影響,因為校方已同意,對應我們籌得的每一元,校方都會捐出一元。)

The route of the walk
The Walkathon Route will begin in Kingston's Pigeon Park at 11am. Walkers will make their way across Clown Corner, Angel Eye, Needle Point and stop at, the rest stop. Afterwards, walkers will return to Clown Corner where they can attend a charity fundraising bazaar.  The walk will take about two hours.  Drinks and nibbles will be available from the rest stop. (64 words)(題目沒有寫明是香港,如果寫明是香港,你就不能杜撰地名。但由於題目沒有寫明是香港,要考你的明顯是寫作能力而不是香港步行路徑知識,所以,你不要花時間想麥理浩徑或其他,不如全部地名老作。其次,只寫route太單調,寫入步行所需時間,休息站(rest stop),休息站有何供應(drinks and nibbles(小食)),以及回到起點/到達終點可以做甚麽(參加一個charity fundraising bazaar),都是情理之中,但不要將這些小節寫得比route的描述更長。)

The work of Walk to Build
Founded in 2001, Walk to Build is one of the largest nonprofit providers of educational services for school-age children in rural China.  It now provides education to 18,000 children through some 1,000 schools in more than 800 locations countrywide.  It also supports rural educators to develop teaching materias tailored for the needs of rural educators. (55 words)(題目既然說raise money to build schools in China,就寫Walk to Build 是提供教育服務的,one of the largest ABCs / one of the leading ABCs 是介紹機構的常用語。可以作點數字,像很具體似的,又容易寫,字又佔得多,划算!還不夠字數?可寫教育的配套服務,例如幫助rural educators開發teaching materials,而這些teaching materials 是專為當地社區的需要而製作的(tailored for the needs of local villages)。) 

香港人網節目:風也瀟瀟,逢星期一、三、五晚上八時至九時,可下載收聽。
http://www.hkreporter.com/channel_list.php?channelid=297
香港人網節目:《毓民踩場》,逢星期一、四晚上十時至十一時半,可下載收聽。
http://www.hkreporter.com/channel_list.php?channelid=3
香港人網節目:《早朝天下》,逢星期一至五上午七時三十分至十時,可下載收聽。

http://www.hkreporter.com/channel_list.php?channelid=351

 
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