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John | 20th Sep 2010, 04:55 AM | HKDSE英文科校本評核(SBA) | (666 Reads)

Does the author create real people?  Does he use dialogue to portray the characters in his novels? 

作者能創造有血肉的人物嗎?他寫的dialogue能顯示人物的性格嗎?

應該能吧。

所以,這句在很多情況下都適用。In his task of creating real people, [name of author] uses dialogue as an effective device. 

如果你覺得作者的對白精采,可以參考以下幾句:

1.       [Name of author] uses dialogue effectively to create real people.  The words in his dialogue are very colloquial(口語的).  The interpolations(添寫)such as “he said” are seldom used. Thus the dialogue comes to the reader as if he /she were listening.

2.      He writes very amusing (有超的)dialogue. 

3.      He ‘poetize’ (詩化)the dialogue.

4.      [Name of novel] is full of brilliant and sparkling (活潑機智的)dialogue.  Here is an example chosen from page _____:

5.      The dialogue is succinct(簡練的)and develops the plot(推動故事情節)

6.      The dialogue is combined with the realistic and the artificial(那對白結合了反映現實和刻意求工的寫法).

7.      The dialogue is full of

l   unstated messages(不明言的信息)

l   wit (才智)and vigor (文筆有力)

l   argot(黑話;行話)and insider-slang(內行俚語)

l   the wit and humorous characteristics of [old Shanghai/America’s Deep South]. (Deep South指美國最南部MississippiSouth CarolinaGeorgiaAlabama 等數州。)

8.      Much of the dialogue in the novel is connotative(充滿寓意的)如果你不很滿意作者寫的對白,可以參考以下幾句:

9.      The dialogue in the story leaves something to be desired at times.  The imaginary dialogue between the characters sounds stiff(生硬) and unnatural(做作).

10.    The dialogue falls flat(未產生預期效果)and cannot draw the reader in(不能吸引讀者).

11.     The story is too reliant on dialogue, and dialogue is not one of the author’s strong suits(強處).

12.    The dialogue is wooden (呆板的)/mundane (平凡的)and the plot is terrible/weak.  

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小插語:

濟弱扶傾,義無反顧(社會民主連線)

 
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